People doing different jobs enjoy different amount of holiday time. Should people have the same amount of holiday time? Give your opinion
Holidays are always happy to everyone in this world especially for those who were working in a company/industries/shops etc. In this modern world the amount of holiday time varies each working class. Some people will argue that holiday's should be neutralized with respect to days and amount for everyone. While others believe that practically it's not possible for may reasons. This essay will argue why vary in happy hours comparatively have more benefits than the neutralized.
Nowadays people are working in diversified industries and cultures. Assume people in a family of 4 working for different sectors. Because, of this diversified happy hours it's highly irrelevant for them to mingle together as a family. For example a person working in IT industry is having holiday time on saturday &sunday. However, other person working in a factory supposed to go to office on that time in order to cover up his shift. Even though he/she may get off on other days of week. However, there's a high chance of break in family bonding because of above said reasons.
In this modern and fast moving era. It's very difficult for the organisations to follow the same holiday policies or standards. Moreover, they have launched this kind of setup by considering the nature and environmental factors. Some people believe that this will break the family bonding. Recent research conducted by university of Toronto proved it's not correct. They took some 1000 families of similar scenario and came up this below. For example the people in a family says following the different holiday schedule will help in many ways both financially and economically. If both were working on the same they need separate car for their commuting and moreover, supposed to leave their kids in day-care which cost more on their budget. So by having different holiday timelines they are obtaining more benefits than the other way round.
People on different job should follow their different holiday time rather than same. This essay discussed why varied holiday time is having more benefits then vice versa. In my opinion i strongly believe that different time-off among the people is much more better in a lot ways and if some one really worried family bonding both can apply off for a week and tour with family will give more bonding rather than the other way around.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, really, so, then, while, for example, kind of, in my opinion, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04381443299 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66271292504 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512886597938 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 626.4 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.8016163768 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5416666667 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312183846857 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953131394387 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110763947542 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208413365734 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799517243748 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.