People sleep less than before in many countries. Why do people sleep less? What effect does it have on an individually and on society?
In many countries, people’s sleep duration has reduced significantly as compared to the past. Advancement in technology and stress are chiefly responsible for the lack of sleep. This can have detrimental effects on both an individual such as damage to health and depression, as well as a society such as fewer community gatherings and a decline in economic growth.
Increase in stress related to professional or personal life and excessive use of technical devices are negatively impacting the sleep cycles of people. Firstly, distresses imposed by office workload have become common these days, due to which people over-think and cannot sleep properly at night. Secondly, the obsession of mobile phones and laptops to use social media or watch online series lure people to be awake till midnight or early morning.
There are numerous negative impacts of poor sleep cycle on individuals. First and foremost, severe health issues such as obesity, cardiac arrests are inevitable due to lack of sleep. Consequently, people who sleep less than usual hours are more prone to get depressed and secluded. In other words, when a person sleeps less, he is less attentive during day time and does not enjoy his work or company of others, which leads to seclusion and ultimately, depression.
Also, society will grapple to fight the consequences of sleep-deprived, unhappy individuals. Primarily, people will be less interested in community gatherings due to poor health conditions. Furthermore, economic growth will slow down owing to unhappy people at the workplace, which will lead to less productivity in organizations.
In conclusion, sleeplessness can become epidemic owing to extreme work pressure and excessive use of devices. Moreover, individuals will get more prone to diseases, and also the societies will face more monetary issue and fewer celebrations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43103448276 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00906478295 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61724137931 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0787323708 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356783819189 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107713627153 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667794264667 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176971605008 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868404375869 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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