In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with
other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes
the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The trend of senior citizens living in an old age home has been accelerated. A matter of concern is who should bear the expenses of aging people? In my opinion, it should be the obligation of the children to provide monetary funds, to support their parents, but if they are not economically strong, they could seek government aid.
It is the moral duty of the adult children to provide financial resources for their elderly parents. Firstly, people should bear the expenditure of their parents out of love and gratitude. Their parents have not only raised them, but they have also made many sacrifices for them. Secondly, with increasing work pressure than ever before, parents care has become secondary, but children owe same dedication to their parents, as their parents demonstrated towards them. Otherwise, this will disparage the value of parenting. To illustrate, numerous couples are childless, as they believe that instead of spending on bringing up a child, who may abandon them in the future, they can enjoy till old age with the same amount.
Finally, children should never forget that by helping their parents, they are being exemplary to their younger generations. For Instance, the latest survey of families indicates, those people who did not take care of their parents, were not respected and supported by their children in their old age. However, people should also realize that in this self-indulging era, they should always have huge savings, which can be used in their time of need. Nevertheless, the government should provide economic support to aged people, if they do not have any savings or back up.
In conclusion, it is essential for every individual should provide monetary help to his parents to the best of his ability.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...but if they are not economically strong, they could seek government aid. It is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0830449827 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63822167359 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574394463668 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0669986796 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.928571429 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21311700151 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079691249969 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293065663773 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132571179188 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443994043648 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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