People sleep less than before in many countries. why people sleep less?
what effect does it have individually and in society?
The world is changing, nature is been altered and result to metamorphosizing of certain things like sleep been reduced. However, important sleep is needed, it is been revealed that balances of sleep differs in countries. This essay will discuss its impact on each person and the community at large.
To begin with, sleep is a very imperative nature that can’t be over-ridden irrespective of the circumstance warranting it depleted; but however the rate of sleep in each person has drastically reduced. Chances of survival and daily needs have resulted to sleep been less than normal in entity. The economy isn’t friendly as situations begin to get hard which has resulted to more thinking and forcefully activity to the brain. Scientifically proven that normal sleep hour’s should be eight but researchers recently discovered that the need for job security has driven each individual to over labour themselves which consumes their time and relaxation, hence sleep time reduces.
Furthermore, it’s an obvious revelation that countries like Pakistan and Israel have been consistently warring with each other. Sporadical shootings of guns, explosions in unexpected places not considering children, women and most especially pregnant women in the hospitals. Under such condition, it’s expected that sleep would be less. Moreover, such act of war has rendered some country barren for reproduction and farming which has resulted into hunger as a result of famine. Relatively to this, countries like America and Egypt do not experience such low rate of sleep to other country at war.
In conclusion, the effect on both individual and community has negatively impacted the sleep rate resulting to different reason to war and survival. As above-mentioned, health related problems have increased exponentially due to sleep rate such as hypertension, amnesia and insomnia and also sudden death of such people in the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: BUT_NEVERTHELESS[1]
Message: Use simply 'but'.
Suggestion: but
...he circumstance warranting it depleted; but however the rate of sleep in each person has dr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98794615451 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596666666667 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3810671808 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.857142857 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231313911652 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824996152597 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722062087631 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138471368878 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401799074938 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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