Sleep is a natural process through which human body relaxes. In this busy world, when compared to past many are not able to achieve sufficient sleep. There are several reasons for this and it will have a devious impact on them and society.
First and foremost factor affecting slepping pattern is stress related to both profession and personal life. In the past, people experienced much more freedom at their work place. But now due to immense work pressure, often people are not able to find a work-life balance. In addition, they have several targets and goal which they should complete within a time frame, forcing them to take work load to home.
Furthermore, expectation about life are much high for everyone. So inorder to obtain the standard of life that they expect, people tend to strech their limits. For example, an average adult in India work for about eight to nine hours a day and spend a portion of their quality time for travelling to and fro . Hence they are only left with a little time for themselves, in that time they prefer to indulge in activities which interests them. It may be either television or mobile phones. In all these cases they choose to give up their sleep time.
Repercussions of this practise is horrendous. On a personal level they become depressed and eventually it might lead to high blood pressure. On the other hand, they will not be able to perform upto the mark in their workplace.
In conclusion, every country should have healthy citizens to have imperative thrive in every field. But the situation prevailing now are supporting that idea and it will definitely have appalling result. Before things get exacerbated, everyone should act to maintain a balance in life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...r quality time for travelling to and fro . Hence they are only left with a little ...
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Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...uality time for travelling to and fro . Hence they are only left with a little time f...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88737201365 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50854433265 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61433447099 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0394458989 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.3684210526 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4210526316 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42105263158 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108688372571 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336483979592 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337997649172 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0606066636406 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405252505827 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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