Plastic bags plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment What damage dose plastic do to the environment What can be done by government and individuals to solve this problem

Essay topics:

Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment.
What damage dose plastic do to the environment?
What can be done by government and individuals to solve this problem?

It is agreed globally that things made of plastic material are unhealthy for environment. It can cause issues like increased pollution and blockages. It is responsibility of us and the state authorities to act for minimizing this issue.

Plastic products are harmful for environment. The fundamental reason is that these products are not decomposable. It is said that plastic bottles or bags will stay for hundreds of years in the mud, but it will not decompose. This causes soil pollution which has negative impact on tree plantation. Moreover, Plastic bags are the biggest reason in blockages in draining systems. These blockages are responsible for causing pollution. The blockages in rainwater draining system can cause serious damages to the life and property of the people living in that area. Plastic materials thrown in wild areas are not only damaging the natural beauty of that area, but also causing harm to the lives of animal who can eat this plastic as food.

This situation demands a prompt response from the society. As an individual, it is our responsibility to make sure that use of plastic in our daily life is minimized. We should make it a habit to utilize reusable material such as cloth bags or decomposable material like paper. From the prospective of government, all steps should be taken to ensure that the utilization of plastic material is minimized. Use of plastic bags in shopping stores should be banned and plastic should be dumped at proper place. Furthermore, government should take steps to educate people about the harms of using plastic. Another step that should be taken by authorities to compensate plastic industry to shift their product line and move away from plastic materials.

In the conclusion, I would say that it is known fact that use of plastic build products are damaging the environment. These products are causing pollution and disturbing the whole ecosystem. It is the high time to act and halt the use of plastic in our life. These actions should be taken at personal level and government level as well

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...like increased pollution and blockages. It is responsibility of us and the state a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02623906706 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77902061368 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498542274052 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3740759964 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3636363636 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5909090909 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339444260057 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106037165086 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077459837778 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205131769367 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053834404847 0.056905535591 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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