Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment.
What damage dose plastic do to the environment?
What can be done by government and individuals to solve this problem?
It is agreed globally that things made of plastic material is unhealthy for environment. It can cause issues by increasing pollution and causing blockages. It is responsibility of all of us as and the state authorities to take action for minimizing this issue.
Plastic products are harmful for environment. The fundamental reason is that these products are not disposable. It is said that plastic bottle or bags will stay for hundreds of years in the mud, but it will not decompose. Plastic bags are the biggest reason in blockages in draining systems. These blockages are responsible for causing pollution. Moreover, blockages in rain water draining system can cause serious damages to the life and property of people living in that area. Plastic materials thrown in thrown in wild areas are not only damaging the natural beauty of that area, but also causing harm to the lives of animal who can eat this plastic
This situation demands a prompt response from society. As an individual, it is our responsibility to make sure that use of plastic in our daily life is minimized. We should make habit to utilize reuseable material such as cloth bags or decomposable material like paper. From the prospective of government, all steps should be taken to ensure that plastic material utilization is minimized. Use of plastic bags in shopping stores should be banned and plastic should be dumped at proper place. Furthermore, government should take steps to education people about the harms of using plastic. Another step that should be taken by authorities to compensate plastic industry to shift their product line and move away from plastic materials.
In the conclusion, I would say that it is known fact that use of plastic build products are damaging the environment. These products are causing pollution and disturbing the whole ecosystem. It is the high time to take action and halt the use of plastic in our life. These actions should be taken at personal level and government level as well.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...easing pollution and causing blockages. It is responsibility of all of us as and t...
^^
Line 3, column 498, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'thrown in'.
Suggestion: thrown in
... living in that area. Plastic materials thrown in thrown in wild areas are not only damaging the na...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03915662651 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76433666413 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487951807229 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7122147456 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.65 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335414673434 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112300620195 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770632551961 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202432782984 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595986193053 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...easing pollution and causing blockages. It is responsibility of all of us as and t...
^^
Line 3, column 498, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'thrown in'.
Suggestion: thrown in
... living in that area. Plastic materials thrown in thrown in wild areas are not only damaging the na...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03915662651 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76433666413 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487951807229 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7122147456 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.65 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335414673434 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112300620195 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770632551961 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202432782984 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595986193053 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.