What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?
An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?
In the modern era of trade, people should be motivated to purchase domestically manufactured products. Local industry has an essential role in running economy of any country. It has also been noticed that the trend of online purchase is on the rise. There are several pros and cons of internet buying and selling which are discussed below.
First of all, local industry plays an integral role in the welfare of any community. It should be encouraged to utilize local potential by purchasing products from markets in your place of living. In this way, money is rotated amongst the masses of local community and that helps in overall economic growth of the region. Authorities should give noticeable tax relieves to the local industry so that products could be sold at lower prices which will benefit both buyers and sellers. Secondly, product quality should be maintained by educating people in the domestic industry about the international quality standards. By doing so, people will have more trust on locally manufactured products.
Increasing trend of online purchase has brought benefits and drawbacks as well. In terms of benefits, online market has enabled users to purchase required stuff without the need of travelling to shop. Secondly, it has made possible to easily procure products from different parts of the world while sitting at your home. This growing trend in beneficial for selling companies as well because now they can target a huge customer base around the world by selling products online. Secondly, in some cases, companies do not need to maintain the fancy outlets in different regions which saves them cost to increase their profit.
On the contrary, there are few disadvantages of online shopping as well. From the buyers prospective, the main risk of online shopping is misrepresentation of products online. There are many complains by the users that they have not received product with expected quality. On the other hand, sellers face the issue of unfair product return in some cases. Moreover, shoppers are not able to decribe their products effectively online which can raise confusions.
Concluding the above discussion, I would say that all efforts should be made to promote the purchase of locally built products. An increase in online shopping has brought many benefits specially time saving but, there are some cons as well.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, first of all, in some cases, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1989.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19321148825 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64259175445 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54046997389 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6315540181 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.4090909091 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4090909091 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272547659882 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749373545226 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329885782065 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143683318051 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166104126563 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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