some people say that now is the best time in history to be living.
What is your opinion about this?
What other time in history would be interesting to live in?
Many believe that the modern era is the most optimal time to be alive. I strongly disagree with this statement due to the stress social media causes, and the 1960s would have been a more interesting decade to live through because of the musical revolution.
The current time is one of the worst times to exist due to the omnipresence of social media apps. These sites reduce the quality of life for millions of people because modern humans can rarely "switch off and relax. It is important for people to have time alone in order to refresh themselves and look after their mental health. Constant notifications increase anxiety and make people feel inadequate due to the impossible task of competing with everyone else in the world. For example, Instagram notifies you when someone likes your picture and many young people feel stressed if they do not get enough attention, but also can't stop checking their phones to check their feeds.
The Sixties would have been a fascinating time to experience because of the innovations in music. Before then, music was quite boring and there was little experimentation. Bands like the Beatles completely transformed the cultural landscape by introducing a completely new sound. This would have been extremely exciting because there are very few times in history when someone can experience something completely unique for the first time. For instance, Sgt. Pepper's
album forged new ground in production, with people hearing pop songs fused with traditional instruments from India for the first time.
In conclusion, although this current time has experienced many technological breakthroughs in the digital space, companies like Facebook and Twitter have a detrimental impact on our mental health, making it one of the worst times to be alive, I would have preferred to live through the 1960s because of how exciting new music was back then.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adverb 'rarely' is usually put before the verb 'can'.
Suggestion: rarely can
...illions of people because modern humans can rarely 'switch off and relax. It is impor...
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Line 3, column 630, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...y do not get enough attention, but also cant stop checking their phones to check the...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...unique for the first time. For instance, Sgt. Peppers album forged new ground ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Album
...st time. For instance, Sgt. Peppers album forged new ground in production, with p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16558441558 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69259610596 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594155844156 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.5722954179 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.642857143 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218259158346 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710623135531 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582340111558 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123062462626 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400615975281 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.