Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think they should be banned.
Do you agree or disagree?
Warning! Earth up to death. This is a message that environmentalist send to people every day. Some individuals believe that, plastic bags should be prohibited and they should be gathered from every shopping center, while others think differently. They think plastic case are the inseparable part of shopping. This essay will shed some light on this argument from both sides and extend my partial support to the former view before arriving at conclusion.
Plastics are the part of materials which are unresolvable, and they are overstayed in earth. Experts believe that, plastic need more than 100 years to go back to the nature or may be never go back. The most garbage in environment is plastic shopping bags, and they think, people should stop using of this material. Moreover, in some individual’s opinion, shopping center may use paper packets instead of plastic bags and they can encourage purchasers to bring their bags with themselves for shopping, or even return the plastic bags to the sellers for recycling. Furthermore, government could play key role on this issue. They should build a special dustbin for separating rubbish near a residential complex, were the huge of garbage are producing. By this method the process of recycling will be easier and the plastics do not throw away to the nature and we will have clear land and sea.
On the other hand, some persons believe that, shopping center need to this packets for their advertising. It is a best way for showing their brand to the buyers, and they cannot eliminate them from their business. Additionally, some people think that, earth and ocean are very big and with this small plastic garbage can not hurt them.
At the conclusion, in my opinion plastic shopping bags should be forbidden and humans who use these kinds of non-biodegradable, are very selfish, because they do not think about health of landscape and next generation too.
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| 2019-04-03 | Amir Nazaripoor | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...s believe that, shopping center need to this packets for their advertising. It is a ...
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Line 7, column 113, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...is packets for their advertising. It is a best way for showing their brand to the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06289308176 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73113886444 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556603773585 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0496431746 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.625 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34559633478 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110813985536 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893644938689 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220184426451 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634318587997 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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