Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.
It is thought by some people that international sporting events are prerequisite to mitigate tensions between different countries and a possibility for each country’s population to express their love to a native country. I totally agree with this statement and in this essay I’ll explain my conviction for this.
It is well-known fact, that every single country has its own most popular sport occasions. People like to visit football, basketball, rugby games in their leisure time to switch their thoughts from work, to support a favorite team and simply to have a good time. For example, football game is the most popular game in Ukraine and all my family members have been watching football by TV for a very long period. Currently my country straggling political and economic unrest due conflict with Russia. People who were brothers to us, instantly became the enemies. However, during the football games, both countries feel more convenient and at least for 90 minutes forget about conflict at all. Besides, there are a lot of politicians who attend football games and in the result, they allowed to take prove something through their high-trained team players.
The other important reason is that every single sport team have its own stores among country where you can buy their merchandise, such as t-shirts, shorts, boots and list goes on and on. These items usually marked by national attributes of the country and people who want to express their love to a country, may just buy patriotic clothing and support favorite team and show that they are not lackadaisical to the country.
In conclusion, popular sporting events are indispensable for country’s inhabitants. These events indisputably contribute to improving relationship between different countries and encourage people to love their country without harming each other.
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'at least', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.278443113772 0.247107183377 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.125748502994 0.155533422707 81% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0988023952096 0.0946595960268 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0359281437126 0.0501214627716 72% => OK
Pronouns: 0.059880239521 0.0437548338989 137% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.107784431138 0.122226691241 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0209580838323 0.0403226058552 52% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82025302217 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0419161676647 0.0326793684256 128% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0808383233533 0.0861772015684 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0059880239521 0.021408717616 28% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0119760479042 0.011925033212 100% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1864.0 1933.35771543 96% => OK
No of words: 294.0 316.048096192 93% => OK
Chars per words: 6.34013605442 6.12580529183 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.408163265306 0.374742101984 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.326530612245 0.28420135186 115% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.224489795918 0.203846283523 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.136054421769 0.137316102897 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82025302217 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.037074148 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602040816327 0.56093040696 107% => OK
Word variations: 66.4614547815 60.7387585426 109% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 22.6153846154 20.7743622355 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2015259825 49.517814964 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.384615385 127.492653851 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7743622355 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.846153846154 0.814263465372 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 55.2684458399 49.1944974215 112% => OK
Elegance: 1.83783783784 1.69124875643 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258405646177 0.332605444948 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0580846635316 0.102741220458 57% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0447391945823 0.0668466124924 67% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.510607358529 0.534860350844 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.18173441169 0.148594505496 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1027377391 0.134430193775 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458500178754 0.0742795772207 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.288022734489 0.324371583561 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0496752995157 0.0638462369009 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172432379392 0.228012699653 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202125772094 0.058150111329 35% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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