Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Every four years world have sporting events such as Football World Cup and Olympic Games which help to bring people of different countries to compete with one another. Such events have always been important factor in reducing feeling of conflict between rival nations. I strongly believe such sporting events are crucial for cordial relationship between countries and reduce teeming conflicts while providing a way to vent feeling of patriotism towards our country.
To begin with, from ancient history when Greeks and Romans where in constant war among each other, they use to stop war to have such friendly sporting events. As a result of this, during that particular time there was peace among two rivals. Similarly, today this international events act as catalyst to cut growing tensions between Palestine and Israel in today's time. For example, once the sport is over the competing athletes of opposite nations will have drinks together and celebrate the spirit of humanity with friendly vibes keeping the true notion of sportsmanship alive. Hence, this events are important in bringing people of different origin and race in unison.
Secondly, sports events such as Football World Cup are significant for countries such as Brazil which are mostly in state of in internal civil war. For example, Brazil has gradually increasing rate of unemployment, with corruption and overall low illiteracy, in such a situation world cup comes as a blessing. The Brazilian squad which in considered one of the best in world fuels the feeling of patriotism in country. Whenever the football matches will telecast on television, everyone from friends, families and even rival gangs become one forgetting their differences and have a sense of proud and attachment to motherland Brazil. All of these is possible because of such international sporting events.
In conclusion, global sporting occasion help in increasing world peace while bringing patriotism in an individual in peaceful way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3482428115 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.690023752 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584664536741 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9880369586 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.571428571 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223094482851 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794111422628 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455859259515 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137184027509 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0124138071257 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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