At present, the media affects people’s lives significantly.
What impact does this have on society? Is it negative or positive
development?
Television and print media are creating a substantial effect on the lives of the general public. This has resulted in biased thinking among society, and it is undoubtedly an unfavourable development.
To embark upon, people follow the current affairs regularly, and the majority of their decisions are influenced by the latest news. In other words, they believe in everything which they read in newspapers and watch on television. Even they believe in fake news which is only based on rumours to misguide public at large. To illustrate, there was a news on some television channels that Delhi Chief Minister Arvind Kejriwal said against the people who are coming to Delhi from Bihar for medical treatments. Later on, it was found that media has created a fabricated version by editing the original video and he actually said something else. Nevertheless, it even created the false image of Mr. Kejriwal in my mind also at first but afterwards, I was able to clear my misconception.
The above-mentioned scenario is adverse because news agencies generally focus on destructive and detrimental elements that are poising the minds of people and affecting their lives severely. Much fake news about the inter-community violence flashes daily all over the channels, which are spreading communal hatred among the communities. Not only that, how these houses spread the news is also provocative. There was news, for instance, in many newspapers that a Hindu man was killed by Muslims in Bihar. The said killing was due to a personal dispute, not any religious matter. However, media spread that as communal violence which resulted in disturbance and conflicts among both religions all over the country. Therefore, it can be said that this strong influence of media could divide and damage society.
In conclusion, the media affect the thinking of the public greatly, and it is harmful to society as it is raising communism and causing disturbance among people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... substantial effect on the lives of the general public. This has resulted in biased thinking a...
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Line 5, column 347, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...blic at large. To illustrate, there was a news on some television channels that Delhi ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, nevertheless, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21135646688 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84368017404 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583596214511 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8999804143 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.25 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119886658218 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384606851055 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361866772144 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846969599885 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207059307025 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.