Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
The notion of adhering with one profession is obsoleting and new emerging trend is in favor of multiple careers and to remain lifelong student. I believe this trend will continue to grow more and more.
The most valuable benefit people perceive with single profession is stability in job and become expert. It is believe that people who practice same profession over the years understand the nitty-gritty of that profession and become assets for an organization they work for, thereby such people enjoy the stability in career and do not apprehend about retrenchment at work place. For instance, my father who has forty five years of experience in electric transformer has never been sacked owing to expertness in his field.
Nevertheless, such conception and reality are diminishing and becoming things of the past. There are various reasons for it. Firstly, in every field, most of the jobs are done with the help of technology, resulting less reliance on individual’s skills and knowledge, and therefore employees are always subject to be redundant at any point in their career. Secondly, technology changes very rapidly and jobs in market follow the changes. It is sheer truth that even loyal and old employees suffer in the organization, if they lack the hands-on on new concepts or demands and eventually get paid lower salary in contrast to their colleagues or junior who possess multitude of latest skills. A case in a point is information technology field where programming model changes every five years and my company gives preference to professional who can execute work in new area.
Finally, there have never been so many things to buy than now and in order to relish the possession of costly items, an extra income is preferred or absolutely leaves no choice for a person who wishes to live luxurious life.
To recapitulate, changing technology and job demand force people to update on latest technology and grab new education. Also modern life style propel people to work extra to generate more income, may be from different profession for satisfying needs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 110, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
...ability in job and become expert. It is believe that people who practice same professio...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 676, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...leagues or junior who possess multitude of latest skills. A case in a point is informatio...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...test technology and grab new education. Also modern life style propel people to work...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, as for, for instance, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11436950147 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81415240118 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609970674487 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.5014074459 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.571428571 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3571428571 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135898061165 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418094632366 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317651577917 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0714238234876 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242273642578 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.