Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Managing more than one business at the same time has become exist in the prevailing time, because it helps to raise income level and standard of living. Moreover, people believe to continue studies at any age so that with the help of modern studies they can raise the limits of their business, like marketing strategies and so on.
It was the time of 1990’s where people believed to run a single-family business, but now demand of the era has changed the whole picture of businesses. Inflation rates have increased almost double from the 90’s it requires more funds to survive so, people for meeting their daily expenses try to earn from another sources. For example, Mr. Mukesh Ambani runs various sector under same name Reliance like Capital, Telecommunication, Filling Stations and many more. Therefore, for extending their limits everyone tries to expand business in the form of variety.
As far as studies are concerned, it is very essential to update any business so that an entrepreneur can easily understand the choice or trend of the market to maximize his turnover. People always required something different from previous so, the courses in marketing strategies are better option because, in these courses’ individual can learn the new sale techniques which can be proved helpful to attract customers. For example during December end owners of toy shops arrange a beautiful live Santa who, attract the children by candies, chocolate and other gifts which raise their income almost 1/4th in just one week. Hence studies also play vital role to expand business.
Conclusively, following same business profile trend has become disappear from the society. To earn maximum new techniques have to follow by salesman, which can be appreciated by new studies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 629, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25783972125 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70965015906 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637630662021 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5031687267 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.75 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0898214886736 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355089657986 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455628004655 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0680981228622 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555354353611 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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