Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.
You should write at least 250 words.
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Cost of living of our society is increasing exponentially these days, therefore many people believe that single profession for earning is not enough like earlier, and everyone should opt for multiple careers at the same time. I do accord with this notion, and will explain in my further paragraphs.
To embark on, as the economy of our nation is growing day-by-day, the expenditure on daily needs are also increasing. There is no doubt that salary of a professional is also increasing as compare to decade ago. However, the rise of living cost and earning level are not raising at the same pace. Therefore, income from one occupation is not enough for a person to run his family. Many employees are looking a second option for earning, and they are enrolling themselves in new vocational trainings or in higher education, which help them to pursue additional career option in co-ordination with the current one. For instance, most of the graduate professionals opt for distance MBA or Executive MBA, which allow them to have an additional degree without discontinuing the current occupation. Later, they can get salary hike as well, after completing the new degree.
Furthermore, do not we get bored by doing same repetitive job every day? A recent survey done by a university shows that most the employees are doing their job because of financial need, not because they love it. If a person can start a job or work which is his/her hobby, he/she always stay happy. Because of this, current generation opt for a second profession, which is his/her hobby or passion such as photography, singing etc. This addition job not only make them happy, but also make them efficient in their current job in addition to extra income. Moreover, the world has become a global village due to development in transportation, and due to the enhancement in social media apps, everyone shares the beauty scenery of the different places, which attract everyone to travel here and there. Therefore, need for money has also increased compare to the past.
To recapitulate, as the cost of living, and day-to-day demands have increased, the multi career option has become a trend among the new generation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'stays'.
Suggestion: stays
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00547945205 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78430310479 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575342465753 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8322954279 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.470588235 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4705882353 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41176470588 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104854306461 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313658433761 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034539994421 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0798683979336 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422430564527 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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