Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no special knowledge of the following topic.
Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines.
Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Currently there is a contentious argument that whether the government should mandate the vaccination of children or not. In the following contemplation I will discuss that why I agree that immunization should be made compulsory by law.
Lifelong disability of a child can be caused due to inability of the parents to vaccinate their children. Since certain viruses can affect the central nervous system of the human body therefore it is necessary to develop antibodies against such viruses. For instance, poliomyelitis is a disease which results in lifelong crippling and limb dysfunction in patients who fail to get immunized by polio vaccine. Another reason for mandatory vaccination is the fact that certain viruses can cause communicable diseases. Therefore, spread of diseases would be more rapid and virulent mutation might occur which might prove lethal. Such course of viruses could result in outbreak of certain serious diseases and result in community spread of diseases. For instance, millions of people died from Spanish flu until its vaccine was invented and made compulsory by the government of Spain.
On the contrary, others argue that certain vaccines might cause adverse drug reactions. The decision to immunize the children should remain with the parents so that if vaccine related side effects occur then government should not be blamed . However, I disagree with this viewpoint. Vaccines cannot be marketed without proper clinical trials and checking their safety and efficacy. For instance, typhoid vaccination drive in south Africa resulted in full efficacy and no side effects were found from the vaccine.
In conclusion, I reiterate that vaccination should be made mandatory as it not only guarantees the health of the person receiving the vaccine but also the health of the whole community. Will the parents understand their responsibility? Still remains a question.
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...cur then government should not be blamed . However, I disagree with this viewpoint...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43728813559 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83444939276 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593220338983 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.919619071 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3529411765 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3529411765 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258874765445 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803719097696 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612828977166 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16831384958 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294992143257 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.