Prevention is better than cure. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures.
To what extent do you agree.
It is believed by many that investment done for precautionary measures of any disease is better than the money spent in research and development done for treatment of that disease, I disagree with the statement as some causes cannot be prevented and prevention is not feasible for long period.
One most important point favour of investment in the cure of disease is that there are multiple reasons for cause of any disease and some are beyond anyone’s control and money can be saved if only one or two causes of disease are there. For instance, with increase in population and change in lifestyle some aids are bond to happen like cancer. It is out the capacity of any individual or research team to change the way of life people live these days.
Another major aspect for investing more in cure than prevention is that prevention technique is not viable for long run. This is because the bacterias and viruses become immune to the medicine. They will fight against those dose and will again enter the body of human being resulting in harming the body. However, if a cure is developed against any disease it will help to fight it for longer years. This in turn will recoup the funds allocated for the invention of that medicine.
In conclusion, I would say that it is better to use money for the development of new medicines to fight against the diseases rather than investing them for prevention techniques as some causes are out of control and short life of preventive measures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78378378378 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57481197055 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521235521236 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.7986979056 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.9 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22939070476 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859703421565 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893992310489 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163583138346 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627009490619 0.056905535591 110% => OK
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.