“Prevention is better than cure”. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures. To what extent do you agree.
Diverging opinions have been voicing over within medical fraternity on whether preventive research is more important than finding a cure for certain disease. I fully support that prevention should be given priority; however, we cannot rule out the importance of treatment in medicine.
Firstly, preventive research has served mankind to insurmountable value. Millions of people were saved in the past because of the discovery of such medicines. one prime example is the discovery of vaccination in 20th century-which saved innumerable lives from the diseases as trivial as common cold or flu. Secondly, modern science has enabled Doctors to early diagnose any illness, which in turn gives a patient an ample amount of time to change his ways and stop the spread of a disease.X-ray, CAT scans and MRI machines is to name a few of these marvelous inventions, which accurately diagnoses the defect within body.
however, preventative treatment has its natural constraints which one cannot ignore simply. new viruses and bacteria are mutating everyday, which attacks anti-bodies of a human being and therefore new diseases are spread around the world every day. such diseases are undetectable to machines and doctor’s medical knowledge and hence, require the new medical research to find an urgent cure for it. Most recent example of such disease is the outbreak of Ebola in Africa, which is highly contagious and deadly. Scientists and researchers have to work tirelessly to control the spread and save human lives.
In conclusion, I believe we cannot overlook the importance of preventive care since it saves people from the misery and pain however, treatment research is equally important to be invested in, if not more
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35766423358 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86774238749 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624087591241 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6860790649 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.333333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160641772393 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600889586866 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438176202703 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101300988056 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351703052387 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.