The prevention of health problems and health illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree.
Nowadays health related diseases are on rise globally due to the sedentary lifestyle of people therefore it becomes challenging for governments to not only offer treatment and medicine but also run health care programs which can help prevent such illness. In my opinion I completely agree with the notion that government funding needs to focus on prevention of such diseases rather than treatment as it is better to prevent a disease and not spent millions of dollars to find a cure. In the below paragraphs I will elucidate and present relevant examples in support of my opinion.
First and foremost in both developing and developed countries lifestyle diseases are on a rise. One of most common reasons identified is obesity which creates other health related complications like high blood pressure, heart attacks, diabetes therefore it becomes necessary for government to organize health camps and spread awareness about eating healthy diets. Since such diseases happens due to lack of awareness in people. For Instance in India government is taking such initiatives whereby they organize monthly health awareness camps in schools and colleges to educate juveniles on importance of healthy diet and exercise on their body.
Secondly it is also undeniable fact that there are many incurable diseases like cancer/HIV which are on a rise therefore government should spend most of its funds on awareness programs rather than finding a cure for such incurable diseases. For instance as per the report from a leading newspaper in United Kingdom it was published that the local government has spent billions of pounds on some research programs to find a cure for cancer and HIV thus wasting the tax payers money. On the other hand government in Singapore has the lowest cancer/HIV rates as they have introduced many programs for health awareness and even heavily taxed the tabbaco products.
In conclusion with the above examples it is clear that prevention is always better than cure therefore in my opinion government should spend money on health awareness programs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27409638554 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68935931136 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536144578313 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.3338910143 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.181818182 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1818181818 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0909090909 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194035799954 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767025071362 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609044565123 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136015308094 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398367349618 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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