Some people think that developing countries need financial help from international organizations. Others think that it is practical aid and advice that is needed. Discuss these views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that international bodies should only provide relief and consultation to developing countries rather than financial help. In my opinion third world countries need monetary support from developed world as they don’t have funding for implementation of large-scale projects due to poor economy. This essay will discuss both views with relevant examples and conclude with an opinion.
First and foremost most of the poor nations are unable to sustain burden of large infrastructure projects like building of airports, railways tracks, dams and hospitals which are needed for improving the life and economy therefore they need investments from global organizations who can propel the growth of the country. These investments not only help in short-term but also give employment opportunities to the local population. For instance Philippines is taking funding for establishing telecommunications infrastructure from China Investment agency. This project will help to bringing better connectivity and bridging the digital divide in the country which has the slowest internet connection in the world.
Similarly on the other side for those who would say that only practical aid and advice are needed I would like disagree with this. In many third world countries there is no shortage of skill set be it scientists, doctors or engineers who can execute any task efficiently as in a first world country. For instance India wanted to carry out high-speed train connectivity from Delhi to Mumbai for which engineering surveys and approvals had already been given by the government however such plans could not be executed due to lack of financial assistance therefore the project was shelved.
To conclude, it is evident from the above examples that financial aid is of utmost importance which can help in sustainable growth of developing nations therefore first world countries must provide monetary aid than anything else.
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also, but, first, however, if, similarly, so, therefore, third, for instance, in short, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52173913043 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98045294236 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.871551835 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.090909091 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207719250192 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811950586713 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046238159409 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134140193092 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440119626028 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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