Some people think that developing countries need financial help from international organizations. Others think that it is practical aid and advice that is needed. Discuss these views and give your own opinion.
It is argued by a significant number of individuals that growing nations require monetary assistance from world bodies. While others do not agree and consider that concrete guidance and practical aid are more wanted. Before reaching to a conclusion, this essay will discuss both the notions in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, assistance in the form of money from world bodies have always helped developing countries to get relief from cash scarcity and many other dire needs to maintain the economy of nation. For instance, recently Pakistan was financially supported by Saudi Arabic in the form of various projects and aid of billion dollars to support the economy of Pakistan and to refund the loans taken from international monetary banks, with this support Pakistan was able to sustain their currency value against dollar and removal of their name from defaulters.
On the other hand, practical advice like guiding the ways to use of different resources helps the nation to become independent and more advance. Right knowledge can suggest developing nations to improve their current resources and to boost production, which directly benefits the nation at various levels including monetary part. For instance, scientific assistance to India from World trade organization has benefited the developing nation India, where natural resources like coal was consumed in a more appropriate way to increase the yield from manufacturing units as a fuel. Therefore, it
directly increase the yield up to 12 percent from the previous production, as a result, addition of more exports from India.
To conclude, although aid in the form of money can support to maintain the current needs, I believe that right guidance or information can help the nation to become developed country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to develop' or 'develop'.
Suggestion: to develop; develop
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... removal of their name from defaulters. On the other hand, practical advice like...
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...facturing units as a fuel. Therefore, it directly increase the yield up to 12 per...
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Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the nation to become developed country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, while, for instance, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34628975265 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73198583121 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579505300353 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.0570449725 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.3 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167845992318 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686577583286 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400071284539 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872802814621 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288319711198 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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