Private citizens, businesses and governments play equally important roles in protecting the environment. Do you agree or disagree?
That the environment is gradually deteriorated is a burning issue which needs drastic actions. Some people believe that the importance of individuals in the environmental conservation is equal to businesses and governments. Personally, I partially agree with this statement.
A part of people claim that actions from enterprises and governments have a greater impact on the enviroment as they are more influential. Firstly, thanks to the considerable amount of money, businessmen possibly establish various organizations and workshops to develop the consciousness on the nature. For instance, they can stimulate some activities such as cleaning beaches, reducing the use of plastic by holding competitions to provide people with more motivation. Secondly, the governments can impose laws on protecting the environment. Citizens whose activities detrimental to the nature may receive heavy punishments like being sentenced for several years.
On the one hand, the role of private citizens in the protection is undeniable. If everyone makes a small effort, there will be significant changes in the world. For example, individual perceptive towards public transports can minimize the emissions, which helps to address the air pollution. Furthermore, the majority of plastic wastes such as straws, cups or bottles are from daily activities. In other words, changes in their lifestyle by using steel straws, reusing bottles or bags certainly lead to the reduction of plastic pollution. Also, actions of the businesses and governments likely have no effects without the supports of private citizens.
To conclude, everyone should take responsibility for the environmental protection. My view is that although more powerful, it would be better for the businesses and governments to corporate with individuals to save the nature.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71691176471 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22355616334 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.216559782 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1875 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18769236399 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609318675383 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776622672432 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107104779782 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035359517672 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.6 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.