Providing a national system in a country where the unemployed receive a regular payment only encourages people not to seek work and puts an unreasonable strain on a country's financial resources.
Discuss this statement and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge.
Unemployment is always a top-notch priority for any country to tackle with. The government has to make the highest efforts on job opportunities to run the economy with ease. One of the various ways to resolve this critical situation is to compensate the unoccupied work-force which, from my point of view, is not a prominent arrangement. The following paragraphs shown detailed discussion.
Financial aid to non-working class will tend to demotivate the working class. As a result, they either become reluctant to work or demand hike in salaries with perquisites in turn it will be a deadlock condition for developing or under developed nations. As governments are earning through various tax imposition and if these moneys is utilized for helping non-workers, it wipes out the fund and there will be no source from where other important aspects to fulfill such as education, health services and securities.
The assistance in terms of money can able unemployed people to set off some of their basic needs. For their other needs those mass has to look for other options and there are chances that might be involved in unlawful means which is harmful for the community. The crime rate will be high and innocents are at a risk. For instance, USA encounter higher percentage of increase in criminal activity in spite of various benefits offer to unemployed class.The report also states that more and more jobless groups are involving into regime to satisfy their requirements.
In conclusion, providing monetary fund to the people who are not engaged in any activity is the ultimate solution. In order to get rid off it, the attempts should be made towards creating more jobs and provide education to enhance their skills so one can be self-employed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07958477509 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83489215779 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650519031142 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.5290711944 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.923076923 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0835334702177 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310420245856 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311621163843 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0500797903821 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161660801066 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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