Psychological illnesses may not be as obvious as physical disabilities or illnesses, nevertheless they are just as disabling in their own way. Society, however, is more accepting of those with physical than psychological illnesses or disabilities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
In today world, more than one tenth of the world population suffers from some sort of psychological problems, still mental illness gets far less priority than it actually deserves than physical disabilities. The worst scenario is that minor psychical issues are generally ignored by the parents, while severe cases are heinously treated by the doctors. Whether more concern should be given on physical problems or psychological problems will be discussed further in this essay?
To embark on, people suffering from any king of physical disabilities are treated by the doctors who uses the best equipment and medicine, however, a person suffering from non-physical problems are treated with a lot of cruelty that is either by locking them in a room or treacherous therapies like shock treatment. Moreover, the hospitals, doctors and nurses available to cure bodily troubles are easily accessible as compared to those treating mental troubles. For example, a recent WHO study shows that the number of medical institutes assigned for treating people with cognitive problems is less than 20%.
Furthermore, the perception of the society towards a mentally sick child is different than a physically unfit child. While parents boldly discuss the bodily difficulties, they generally hide their children with brain related issues so that they are not mistreated. The astigmatism of the community towards such children causes difficulty for them to compete with the world independently and confidently. Although the government allocates a lumpsum budget in the research of deadly diseases, there is hardly any money assigned for treating people with psychical troubles. For instance, India allocate a big share of its budget for the healthcare sector, but there is no separate allocation for preventing and curing cerebral problems.
To conclude, in my opinion the public should change to old belief about the mental problems and efficient and efficacious therapy in treating psychological problems should be given as much important as treating physical issues
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, while, for example, for instance, sort of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50157728707 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85884140105 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593059936909 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.2464787568 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.333333333 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4166666667 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203704936505 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675055823949 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601617146374 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120385938848 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579063328176 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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