Q The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing Do you agree or disagree

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Q) The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.

Do you agree or disagree ?

The local markets are going to shut down as a result of more and more people making online purchases . In my opinion ,I agree that shops will close down as a result of advancement in e-commerce as people find online shopping more convenient and it enables comparison of products .

One point to consider is that the closing of brick and mortar shops is bound to happen as online shopping offers more convenience and facilities . In other words , people can order products in the comfort of their homes and have them delivered at their place irrespective of the bad weather or any health problem. For example , A working couple who do not have time during the week , can very easily and quickly order online rather than queuing up in the shops on busy Sundays and wasting their only holiday . Also during the peak of covid -19 pandemic ,when it was not possible to move out of our houses , online shopping was seen by people as more practical and convenient .

Another point to consider is that an online catalogue lets people compare features of different products in detail ,which traditional shops fail to offer. Moreover , people from across the world share experiences and reviews about usage of particular products which can be seen by other online shoppers and therefore, enable them to make informed decision before spending their hard earned money . Take for instance , women before buying cosmetics , clothes often see the comments of other users about the quality of that product.

In conclusion , closing down of shops is inevitable with the progress of e-commerce as it provides a stress free and an enjoyable shopping experience.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99270072993 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53798306233 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594890510949 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.7128828296 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.8 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228025349684 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101642390824 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922098977541 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148604701272 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532170861442 0.056905535591 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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