Q: People nowadays work hard to buy more things. This has made our life generally more comfortable but it is a pity many traditional values have been lost on the way to such materialism.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
style="font-size: 13.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif;">some people belive that lucrative jobs resulting from urbanization with demanding work stress on individuals , however meeting a decent financial remuneration, increased the consumer good puchase on a perspective to lead a comfortable lifestyle. On the flipside, some opine that this modernization is deteriorating the long held customs and traditions , which might be a cause of concern. I am in consummate accord with the preference for traditional style of living over the adapted urban style , owing to many long term benefits and stable living conditions it might bring.
One evident reason to carry traditional customs is that the health benefits our ancestors carried over years following a type of food consumption, clothing , agricultural practices and medicial treatments. These activities were meant for the kind of people specific for that region, to develop a healthy lifestyle. this is clearly evident from from age standardized mortality rate in regions from China , where people tend to live longer, stronger and healthier than people from other regions of the world.
Admittedly, the weather/season prediction, the astronomical inferences like location of stars , predicting the solar or lunar eclipses, the medical surgeries, treatment of unknown diseases have already been mentioned in many scripts even before the advent of the term "Science", "Renissance", or "industrial revolution" over the world. this is quite convincing that its important for us to dig our precious ancestral customs or scripts and bring them into practise , than following the so called recent scientific advances. There are evidences of airplanes and flying saucers in Indian scripts like Mahabharatha. Also, the traditional ayurveda and Yoga for a perfectly functional human body were adopted from the age old Asian literature.
Henceforth, it can be stated that, any lucrative job we are engaged in hoping for a comfortable lifestyle , will be acheived only by glorifying and practising our traditional practices and customs. this will contribute to a better health, suitable technology use and a contentment in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.87841945289 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.67181876999 2.80592935109 131% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647416413374 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.9564286072 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.166666667 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4166666667 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105691363119 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371261859534 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0156428547277 0.0667982634062 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0641358866759 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0118426967793 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.12 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.3 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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