Many employees may work at home with the modern technology. Some people claim that it can benefit only the workers and does not benefit employers at all.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The advent of smart technologies has enabled flexible work options for the current generation. On the perspective of a office task management from home, some opine that, is only beneficial to the employee but not the organization. I am in consummate accord with the higher productivity and innovation, the work from home option might contribute.
one evident reason, an personnel would like to achieve at work place is a demonstration of a greater skill set. The ones hired if allowed on flexible front, will be able to work without any stress, despite the project deadlines, utilizing his/her range of technical know how. The employees of google were allowed to work for a 5 day week despite the work location, which however generated a positive impact on the individual's performance. workplace problem solving can also be thus enhanced with a wider tech demo of the candidate.
Another reason to consider is the creativity ought to be resulted from working in a comfy zone rather than a desolate ambience. The environment a person wish to toil significantly stimulates his intellectual capabilities. Cozy or crowdy sitting areas with noisy colleagues might disturb the cognitive abilities of the individual .
Finally, the time management can best be attained from the member, by sometimes avoiding the travel to workplace. Thanks to the modern advances, enabling all visual interactions possible from any remote locations. The comfortable site for task execution , even at home will be able to avoid the long tea breaks or lunch breaks and will support the organization and the project clients making the staff available all time. This will also aid in proper time schedule for the individual to manage both personal and professional activities.
While people may vary in their opinions, I strongly advocate the need for a convenient work site for an employee, which might aid in multi task resolving and all time availability. The organization and the one who attend the same will be mutually benefitted.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...he cognitive abilities of the individual . Finally, the time management can bes...
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...long tea breaks or lunch breaks and will support the organization and the project...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, may, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27384615385 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97046911201 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627692307692 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1334509407 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.125 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3125 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14490188434 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441781321967 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322921180215 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769034374652 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309199464871 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.