Many employees may work at home with the modern technology. Some people claim that it can benefit only the workers and does not benefit employers at all.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With aid of the latest technology there are many employees working from home, whereas there are few who claim this does not benefit job providers. I agree to the point that it benefits professionals, but I disagree that there is no advantage to the companies.
Considering firstly the advantages of working from home for staff, an important one to consider is that they get to support family in an emergency. Of late with majority of families being nuclear in nature and both parents being working professionals, if a child falls sick, then it is either of the parents who need to look after the child. In such scenarios, the feasibility of work from home will be beneficial as they need not lose out on privileged leaves. As a result, the employee will be able to meet business targets and look after the offspring as well.
On the other hand, the cardinal reasons why I deny that there are no benefits to the companies are that they help in maintaining employee satisfaction and continuity of the business. With regards to the former, as discussed above, if an organization supports the workers in their emergencies, the professionals tend to be loyal, thereby, creating satisfaction. As for the latter, whenever there are climatic disasters, with availability of telecommuting, an employee can continue daily work. Contradistinction, these benefits would have not been possible without this option.
In conclusion, in my perspective, there are definite benefits to the personnel such as standing by family during emergencies and for the company, the merit of worker satisfaction and continuity in flow of work, all these are possible due to working from home.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, so, then, well, whereas, as for, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08727272727 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04489818527 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567272727273 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.866204714 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.181818182 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221025602032 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864838935309 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614437573967 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154165335856 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785007418242 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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