Question :credit and debit cards will replace coins and paper money do you agree or disagree?
It is ubiquitously known that plastic money has taken mammoth dimension in the most parts of the world. No matter how much preference is given to this practice, however, paper money and coins can never be replaced by debit and credit cards for the some reasons, elucidated in the upcoming segments.
First and foremost issue is that there are many sections of society which are poverty stricken where not everyone can afford debit and credit cards. High literacy rate among such people force them to get deprived of using plastic money. Moreover, technology is not very advanced in all nations rather there are many countries where even swap machines are not available, for instance, ATM technology is not there in countries like Nigeria, Liberia and few more. As such, this practice is not genuine there.
Likewise, if conditions require transaction deal, it is very regretful for people for purchasing petty things like for buying a pen, pencil or notebook. Thus, it is not logical. Also, one section of society is not comfortable with debt and credit cards as there is no security or privacy. As per, English Tribune, the ratio of hackers has increased who hack the accounts by using stolen or theft ATM cards. In such case, people prefer to carry money with them instead of taking risk.
However, plastic money makes the transparency as it reduces the black money. Nevertheless, carrying heavy chunks invite the thieves and robbers and banks cards are convenient to carry which gives the people sense of security in harsh weather conditions like rain as well.
To recapitulate, although, affinity cards have made the life easier of layman, however, the disappearance of coins and paper money can never be expected.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...laced by debit and credit cards for the some reasons, elucidated in the upcoming seg...
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Line 2, column 127, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to debit'
Suggestion: to debit
... stricken where not everyone can afford debit and credit cards. High literacy rate am...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, likewise, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03146853147 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51498759433 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587412587413 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5543354407 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.785714286 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189424077066 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588982058774 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686529480279 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114327518407 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686562462128 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.