a growing number of people feel animals should have the same rights as humans discuss the difficulties that the adoption of such a policy would have for humans what is your opinion on this matter.
It is irrefutable that animals are tenth creature of nature and should have certain rights in their lives. Some people favour to give human rights to animals while others are more suspicious about its repercussions owning to several difficulties which can be faced during the adoption of such practice. Same will be elucidated in the upcoming segments along with my perspective.
First and foremost difficulty of giving equal rights to creatures as a common man is breakdown of industrialisation. By this I mean myriad of products are made from the skin of animals like leather item which will put a full stop to leather factories. Thus, it may increase the in unemployment rate. In such case, when there is no skin of animals, no items are prepared and consequently, no workers are hired.
Similarly, equal preference to human and animals may affect the food chain. To be more precise, there will be no room for non veg food which can be precarious for a layman. Every celebration, for example, is incomplete without meat. Also, countries like China may have to face starvation as their basic food is non veg only. Not only this but animal testing is also an important practice for updation in medical field if animals have same right like humans then one can not imagine to test the drugs and treatments; which may create starvation among people. Rabits, for instance, are used to test baby products if it is stopped, children may suffer from chronic diseases at an early age.
To recapitulate I vehemently vouch that although the animals are aesthetic beauty of nature and have some rights however giving them human right is totally worthless which may be dangerous for the people and nature for long term in terms of low economy, inbalanced food chain, precarious for human being and so on due to different mental and physical abilities between human and animal.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'imagine testing'.
Suggestion: imagine testing
...same right like humans then one can not imagine to test the drugs and treatments; which may cre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, similarly, so, then, thus, while, for example, for instance, i mean
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89905362776 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68976609103 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580441640379 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.3512550271 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.928571429 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275603347572 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850324874273 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722344705704 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173118663183 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664123057869 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'imagine testing'.
Suggestion: imagine testing
...same right like humans then one can not imagine to test the drugs and treatments; which may cre...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, similarly, so, then, thus, while, for example, for instance, i mean
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89905362776 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68976609103 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580441640379 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.3512550271 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.928571429 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275603347572 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850324874273 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722344705704 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173118663183 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664123057869 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.