Some people think that higher salary is important when choosing a company to work for while others think that good atmosphere at a workplace is more important.
Discuss both view points and give your own opinion?
it is ubiquitously known that money is an utmost important requirement of human being in order to lead a perfect life, therefore, working with huge amount of income is acceptable among them. Whereas, others deny this fact and prefer to work in serene environment than that of getting higher salaries by indulging in unsuitable workplace. This essay shall elucidate both the perspectives in ensuing fragments along with my personal slant.
According to the first school of thought, money makes the mare go, therefore, earning heavy chunks can fulfill their desires. By this I mean, due to the stiff competition among societies; everyone wants to earn more than others in order to lead luxurious lifestyle. Hence, atmosphere of workplace is not considered by such minds. Not only this but also there is no poverty ridden section which is even unable to earn livelihood. As such, work environment doesn't matter for them. In such cases, wages are preferred and people are ready to do adventurous tasks even. As per the research by Dubey Business Department, 73% labour work is done by poor section with high salaries where type of work or ambience is not considered.
However, some masses give preference to good atmosphere at workplaces since they are health conscious and believe that health matters more than money. To illustrate, such people are unable to complete a uphiill tasks. They, sometimes, have health issues and require suitable environment. In this matter, work ambience is preferred. What is more, a good atmosphere provides security and safety. To be more precise, most people, especially women seek for safe zone while doing jobs as they are more susceptible to be victim of henious crimes and have less physical strength. Resultantly, working conditions are pondered by females.
To recapitulate, after analysing both the viewpoints I vehemently vouch that self contentment, safety and security, health and so on aspects are more important than income. Consequently,considering above factors is a wise idea of before indulging in a job and one should prefer to work with having completed rudimentary requirements, however, working merely for money is worthless.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, while, i mean, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26436781609 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96180044189 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629310344828 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6866223041 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4210526316 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3157894737 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42105263158 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209119522246 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576197625873 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401005292515 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119460876568 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304704232923 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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