Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course of University education others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work.
Do you agree or disagree with the statement.
Gone are the days when masses preferred to indulge in work without getting into higher education. However, this attitude has undergone a sea change ever since the globalisation took place; where professional degrees do matter. Still there is a section of society which preferred to work without going to University. I completely agree with the former statement owning to several reasons, elucidated in the upcoming segments.
First and foremost reason that why one should get degrees before involving in work is that individuals can never accumulate professional jobs without advanced education. To be more precise, each and every job vistas, these days, look for degree holders as they are more familiar with every aspect of that particular work as compared to the naive workers. A mechanical, doing work after secondary education, for instance, is less familiar with internal operation system of machines and has little knowledge about things which works for short run only. Thus, an engineer with advanced and pragmatic knowledge is more acceptable in workplaces.
Similarly, a degree holder has more opportunities to get promotions which eventually boosts their salary whereas less educated people have to do labour jobs with very limited wages. Hence, they are forced to limit their lifestyle and enjoy less facilities of being occupational jobs like carpenter, car mechanic and many more. As per BBC, 91% students with Masters education, are employed in multinational companies while there is no room for naives.
However, some people believe that working after school makes a student more experienced and they can start earning and savings at an early age which makes them able to handle financial and economic situations when they are very young. Also, they need not to waste huge amount of money in the universities. Nevertheless, if one spends hefty amount of money on higher education, gets jobs with high income and time to time promotions as well. Therefore, it is not wastage of money.
To recapitulate, I vehemently vouch that indulging in job is only appreciable after doing University education as one is more advanced has vocational knowledge which pave the way to better lifestyle and many more benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, second, similarly, so, still, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27605633803 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77269538795 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605633802817 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.102008685 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0625 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1875 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230736327092 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673038300108 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050490229814 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128981165047 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356887248124 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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