These days people finds brides or grooms with the help of websites. Is it a positive or negative development?

Essay topics:

These days people finds brides or grooms with the help of websites. Is it a positive or negative development?

Gone are the days when minute intricacies were probed before getting into marital knots. However, eversince the modernization took place this trend has undergone a sea change as most people prefer to find suitable match on internet. To my mind, this is obviously a negative approach owning to several reasons, elucidated in the subsequent paragraphs.

One serious problem that arises from finding partner online is that sometimes people are kept under dark. To be more precise, people make fake profiles and naive individuals become victim of frauds as accurate details are not mentioned such as age, job status, residential locations and many more; consequently, one cannot rely on such applications. Not only this but also people can not observe each others' bahaviour and nature since couple is not known to each others as well as families for long which may end up with divorce.

However, some believe that it is an era of jealousy where one can not get support from kith and kin and matrimonial sites come as saviour during right time of marriage as well as it gives the option to choose the people according to their choice. Nevertheless, internet does not guarantee if the chosen partner will be perfect or not. In this case, one should opt for finding match online only, where they can probe their backgrounds and can get satisfaction of their priorities.

To recapitulate, I vehemently vouch that although it is an epoch of technology where everything is done on internet yet finding life partner on websites is not a wise idea as it is a very pertinent decision which should be taken meticulously otherwise it may ruin one's entire life.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 6, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Gone are the days when minute intricacies were p...
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Line 5, column 304, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to partner'
Suggestion: to partner
...ternet does not guarantee if the chosen partner will be perfect or not. In this case, o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96389891697 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69623132551 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653429602888 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.1640528855 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.5 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10944123463 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419498867998 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0248458345715 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0621980273949 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324285856247 0.056905535591 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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