Many people fulfill the demands of their children nowadays. what are the causes, effects and solutions?
Gone are the days when demands of offsprings were paid less heed whereas in this materialistic epoch, this attitude of parents has undergone a sea change. This essay shall scrutinize the causative reasons in the ensuing segments along with effects and possible measures.
First and foremost reason that why parents pamper their children by fulfilling their desire is that they try to overcome their guilt by offering materialistic goods to them. To be more precise, guardians are engaged in their graveyard shift, thus, have less time to spend with their young ones. Therefore, in order to find them complaintless they compensate time with money and electronic gadgets. Not only this but sometimes impressionistic minds come under peer pressure also. By this I mean, they want everything what their friends have; consequently, force their parents to buy the same for them. Also, availability and and accessibility of things is one of the prominent causes of this menace. To illustrate, markets are flooded with variety of technological gadgets which allure the attention of tender minds. As such, parents have to buy these things for them.
Moving further to first effect of satisfying all the wishes of naive once is that they become materialistic which leads to communication gap. In this case, when offsprings indulge in money oriented matters they show less interest in spending time with elder ones and they get deprived of moral values and etiquettes which makes them violent and aggressive. This becomes great threat not only for family but for the society as well. The bravta, world's largest criminal organisation, revealed that 69% teenagers get haywire due to the lack of personal guidance.
However, in order to curb this problem parents should spend quality time with their young ones. They should keep constructive conditions to please the demands. For instance, they should set targets such as if the get 80% marks only then they will get desirable goods. What is more, government should keep checking on media advertisements which allure the children with unnecessary products. Even such kind of advertisements should be banned. Schools should also make pupils aware about the serious consequences of being astrayd from the real path of life.
To recapitulate, after analysing all these aspects I vehemently vouch that no doubt children need materialistic goods to keep pace with the technological era, however, over pampering by parents can mar down their actual perspective and it brings the society on the virge of danger.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for instance, i mean, kind of, no doubt, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2137.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 408.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23774509804 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76780589481 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3628540162 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.761904762 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09523809524 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124744650155 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349654527969 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473941532445 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0632204998048 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431618106307 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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