Some people say that a person’s success depends on his/her upbringing by parents. Do you agree or disagree?
Role of parenting in one's success is one of the most common ongoing debates. While ethical values and value of hard work inculcated by parents are deemed of great significance, stories of people bearing no parents or families prove that nurturing is not always a factor determining success.
Indeed, certain success attributes like hard work, being punctual and the like are generally familiarized from parents. If they develop the habit of working extraordinary in their kids, it takes them closer to success. In other words parents who pay close attention towards their kids are more likely to recognise their talents providing them with the needed facilities further. for illustration a child being put into practice in guitar in early days would become more talented and expertise than those children whose guardians could not facilitate their child in a similar manner. Thus, a child's upbringing ensuring frequent parent child interaction incorporated with required facilities is of great importance in determining their success.
Nevertheless, many success stories are heard in the world where people have got success despite poor childhood life. The Prime Minister of India, Mr Modi is a best epitome for this who was an orphan and worked as a child. Even parents who said bad examples in front of their children and fail to naresh them are able to be a successful personalities factors like hard work, self determination and sometimes luck play a dominant role over parents up bringing in regard to accomplishments.
To contribute, therefore, although I agree that parent's contribution is a a major factor in their child's success, in certain cases a person's faith and motivation take them in the path of success despite poor parenting.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, while, in other words, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25978647687 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85861056477 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633451957295 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.6984179854 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.363636364 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113433058838 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489740679923 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381025952186 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800673372387 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234411050504 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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