You have bought a ticket for a live concert (music program) but cannot attend it. so you decided to offer the ticket a friend.
write a letter to him/her and say
-give details about a concert explain
-why you would not be able to attend the concert
-suggest how your friend will receive the ticket
Dear Smith
Hi, how are you? I hope this letter finds you in the best of health and prosperity. It has been a long time since we have met but you are always in my thoughts. You will be glad to know that a live music concert is going to be held on 3rd March near your home in Kips market.
I had bought a ticket for this concert but unfortunately I got call from my manager that I would have to attend an urgent meeting in Delhi on the same day. Therefore, it seems impossible for me to attend this concert so I am sending this ticket to you so that you can enjoy this opportunity. Jolly, one of our friends ,was also telling me that you were planning to buy ticket but you could not owning to houseful. And it would be my pleasure to offer you this ticket. More interestingly, your favourite singer Gurdas Maan is going to perform there. I want you to collect this ticket from my mother at my home because I have to leave for Delhi today in the evening otherwise I could give you this pass. if you are not able to collect please write me back that how can you get it, I will try to do the same. Finally, closing the letter. Love for uncle and aunt.
Waiting for your response.
Love
Anna George
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e to attend this concert so I am sending this ticket to you so that you can enjoy...
^^
Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s opportunity. Jolly, one of our friends ,was also telling me that you were planni...
^^
Line 3, column 395, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'own'
Suggestion: own
...lanning to buy ticket but you could not owning to houseful. And it would be my pleasur...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 703, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...g otherwise I could give you this pass. if you are not able to collect please writ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 32.9175257732 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.13247863248 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20635773712 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581196581197 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3649659559 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.4666666667 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46666666667 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416383965368 0.216113520407 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127343080798 0.0766984524023 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858468815819 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230994102373 0.12726935374 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143557913525 0.0580467560999 247% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.38 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.13 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e to attend this concert so I am sending this ticket to you so that you can enjoy...
^^
Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s opportunity. Jolly, one of our friends ,was also telling me that you were planni...
^^
Line 3, column 395, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'own'
Suggestion: own
...lanning to buy ticket but you could not owning to houseful. And it would be my pleasur...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 703, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...g otherwise I could give you this pass. if you are not able to collect please writ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 32.9175257732 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.13247863248 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20635773712 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581196581197 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3649659559 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.4666666667 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46666666667 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416383965368 0.216113520407 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127343080798 0.0766984524023 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858468815819 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230994102373 0.12726935374 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143557913525 0.0580467560999 247% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.38 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.13 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.