some people believe that children's success in adulthood is related to the way they have been raised by their parents do you agree or disagree give your own opinion and examples.
It is irrefutable that upbringing plays an important role in becoming a successful person among adults. To my mind, they are not the parents only who make their children exce while they there are other factors also which are equally required to be a perfect person, same will be discussed in the upcoming segments.
First and foremost factor apart from the guardians which acts as saviour in adulthood in order to become successful is school. To be more precise, pupils learn various traits in school from their teachers which are not taught at homes like teamwork and so on.thus, institutions and mentors are equivalent to parents in individuals' life. Not only this but role models also are followed by youngsters which influence them a lot. To illustrate, everyone has role model whom people usually imitate in terms of looks, eating, behaving wearing and so on. As such, following role models is an unavoidable factor for being successful among juveniles; as, when they get to know about struggling life of celebrities same is followed by the followers which proves fruitful for long term.
Undoubtedly, parents are first teacher of children who teach them the real philosophy of life that how to deal with the problems and find their solutions which leads them to the way of success. Nevertheless, some parents are not happy with the God gifted skills of their offsprings and never appreciate them to choose it as career. Armymen, for example, in many societies are not accepted by their parents of being afraid of separation from their children. In such cases, other factors play an vital role to make an individual successful.
To recapitulate I vehemently vouch that although parents teach their children etiquettes, moral and social values yet their talents and interests are unleashed in school,by following role models, in peer group and so on.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 572, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aring and so on. As such, following role models is an unavoidable factor for bein...
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Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'careers'?
Suggestion: careers
...d never appreciate them to choose it as career. Armymen, for example, in many societie...
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Line 3, column 491, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...dren. In such cases, other factors play an vital role to make an individual succes...
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Line 4, column 170, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , by
...ts and interests are unleashed in school,by following role models, in peer group an...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, nevertheless, so, thus, while, apart from, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05211726384 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65476908895 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583061889251 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.2230127009 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.25 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155492504803 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599531185691 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041337179165 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102951340044 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325380752884 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 572, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aring and so on. As such, following role models is an unavoidable factor for bein...
^^
Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'careers'?
Suggestion: careers
...d never appreciate them to choose it as career. Armymen, for example, in many societie...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 491, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...dren. In such cases, other factors play an vital role to make an individual succes...
^^
Line 4, column 170, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , by
...ts and interests are unleashed in school,by following role models, in peer group an...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, nevertheless, so, thus, while, apart from, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05211726384 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65476908895 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583061889251 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.2230127009 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.25 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155492504803 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599531185691 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041337179165 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102951340044 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325380752884 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.