With the recent improvement to internet, people can leave views or opinions on certain goods or services they have purchased. it is good n=or bad thing. discuss both views and give your opinion
Technology has affected all aspects of our life and one of them is the way we do shopping through internet. There is no doubt that in correct circumstances, this is a valuable tool. However, if used for the wrong purpose, it becomes dangerous weapon and detrimental to both individual and corporate business.
Technology has eased out our life tremendously. Nowadays, we do not need to go into the hassle of mega shopping complexes, rather we can buy any product or services, within the walls of our homes and in the comfort of our beds through internet. All major brands have their exclusive websites, so customer can compare prices among different products and sellers. Anything can be bought by the click of a button and delivered at our doorstep and paid through credit cards.
The trend of buying online has gained a momentum in past decades. However, there are companies, who is taking advantage of this trend by selling fake things. They make their websites, flashy and attractive, marketing department use different shades of light and online software to modify the visuals completely. Sometimes the actual product has no resemblance with the advertised one.
People sometimes spend enormous amount of hard-earned money on fake products. This threat could be minimized by reviews and opinions of consumers. In addition to this, they sometimes post the photos of bought clothes, shoes, gadgets and accessories they bought. This gives the gist of information to prospective buyers and they make informed decision and buy best bet. This also helps industries incredibly to tailor their production and marketing strategy accordingly to the demands.
Having thought about it, I believe opinions and reviews are extremely essential and helping other fellow buyers to have complete and comprehensive information about the product or service. This will also demotivate fake companies and compels them to make and sell competitive products.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 287, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to make and sell competitive products.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, so, in addition, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30322580645 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80170900721 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2247402402 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101503583381 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0277194279115 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024656797414 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0520207917159 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197058713414 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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