Some people believe that it is important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to show that we care about them. Other think that there are better ways to show that we care about them. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Gifts are used for centuries to show love and care, and take any form like monetary or non monetary, both have their own place. However, I believe that, love which is free could be given freely and is more valuable.
Gifts could be in the form of money, clothes, shoes, accessories, gadgets, laptops, new house, cars, tickets to a lovely place, and admission to university and much more. On the one hand, Gifts solves an enormous kind of issues. In addition to representing someone’s emotions, valuable things help people in need. Firstly, some relatives and friends desperately need something, however, they are too proud to ask, if given with consideration, these gifts can help people in dire situation. Secondly, children, women and older people cannot earn by themselves, they are dependent, giving them valuable gifts will take care of their needs. Thirdly, extremely expensive necessities like cars, houses and admission in a good college, institute or university are beyond most of the people’s means, such invaluable gifts can tremendously change another person’s whole life.
The best gift is a gift of love. No one needs to buy expensive stuff out-of-the-way to show affiliation and affection, rather it could be attained in little day to day actions. Firstly, the optimum way of caring someone is taking their side during fights, argument and issues between family and friends. When you take the unconditional side of your beloved wife, she will know you care about her and the bond between you will get stronger. Secondly, helping to complete a task before the deadline with care, accuracy, minute to detail is also greatest present. Because, sometimes these things have a dire effect on another person’s life and credibility and long-term happiness. Thirdly, Empathy is feeling, the feeling of loved one’s issues. No money is needed, just assure them that you understand their situation, can feel their hurt and anxiety and depression. Finally, poor ones cannot afford to present gifts to their family because they are already snowed under expenses and debts.
After thinking about it, I believe non monetary gifts are much more important and dearer to heart because they are given on a daily basis all year around. Expensive gifts could be given based on need and sparingly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: also the greatest
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1951.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20266666667 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.707889379 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3509324441 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.684210526 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7368421053 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36842105263 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214356270209 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584027177397 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434466940329 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123269384664 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175173380426 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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