You have recently attended a job interview which went well, but you are still waiting for the decision. Write a letter to HR manager of the company and say. Give details of the JobWhy do you think the interview went well?why do you need to know the result

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You have recently attended a job interview which went well, but you are still waiting for the decision. Write a letter to HR manager of the company and say.
Give details of the Job
Why do you think the interview went well?
why do you need to know the result?

Dear Madam/Sir,
My name is Saira Faiz. I had my interview with your prestigious company on 15th of September for the Post of “Business Analyst” at 3pm.

The job requirements ware aligned with my academic background and in addition to it, i have extensive job experience related to preparing financial statements, feasibility study, financial modelling and decision-making. Therefore, I prepared my interview with extreme detail and given detailed answers to all of the question with examples to completely satisfy the panel. Consequently, appreciation from one of the interviewers confirmed and showed extreme interest in my joining the company.

As i have said, my extensive experience in the field make me eligible candidate for any corporation. I have gotten an offer from another well-known international corporation and they are paying me an enormous amount of money as salary. However, all my life, my goal was to join your company one day. Would you kindly inform me about the decision taken against my case? It will help me to take informed decision accordingly.
I hope to get your response in relation to aforementioned issue ASAP.

Yours faithfully,
SAIRA

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Average: 8.1 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...me detail and given detailed answers to all of the question with examples to completely sa...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...relation to aforementioned issue ASAP. Yours faithfully, SAIRA
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, consequently, however, if, therefore, well, as to, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41935483871 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28856953089 2.54303337028 129% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661290322581 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8677595515 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 4.34317383033 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106608332779 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0342793005583 0.0766984524023 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295611819719 0.0603063233224 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0536568240902 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321505901729 0.0580467560999 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 70.7449484536 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 8.71597938144 159% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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