You have recently attended a job interview which went well, but you are still waiting for the decision. Write a letter to HR manager of the company and say
– Give details of the job.
– Why do you think the interview went well?
– Why do you need to know the result?
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regards to the interview that I recently attended at your organizing. It was an opening for the position of a team manager in the IT department to spearhead the new project and lead the 8 member team.
Let me explain my point of view of the interview. Firstly, even though my education background did not match the criteria, yet I was selected based on my team handling experience. Secondly, I answered all the questions with confidence, in addition to providing some useful insights on how to cut costs and increase company profits. Lastly, I have obtained all the necessary permissions and possess the required license to develop the new software. Moreover, this level of technology is in it's initial stages and very niche and therefore not many have access to it.
Could you please let me know the outcome because in my opinion the interview was a success? On the other hand, I have received a couple of offers from other companies and would need to know the result by end of today, leaving me free to consider other options.
I look forward to your reply.
Your sincerely,
Mary Smith
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...g for the position of a team manager in the IT department to spearhead the new project...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, lastly, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77272727273 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64987924523 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661616161616 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2891536465 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9090909091 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 4.34317383033 247% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127141331544 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404637501592 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453395519369 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0669201589589 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505196712306 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.