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You have recently attended a job interview which went well, but you are still waiting for the decision. Write a letter to HR manager of the company and say. Give details of the JobWhy do you think the interview went well?why do you need to know the result

Essay topics: You have recently attended a job interview which went well, but you are still waiting for the decision. Write a letter to HR manager of the company and say.
Give details of the Job
Why do you think the interview went well?
why do you need to know the result?

Saira Faiz's picture

Dear Madam/Sir,
I am writing with regard to my interview with your prestigious company. My name is Saira Faiz. I had my interview on 15th of September for the Post of “Business Analyst” at 3pm.

My childhood dream was to work for your company one day and as this vacancy was aligned with my academic background and in addition to it, having extensive job experience related to preparation of financial statements, feasibility study, financial modelling and decision making makes me ideal candidate. Therefore, I gave detailed answers to all of the question with examples to completely satisfy the panel. Consequently, appreciation from one of the interviewers confirmed my prediction and showed extreme interest in my joining the company.

As i have said above, my extensive experience in the field makes me eligible candidate for any corporation. I have gotten an offer from another well-known international corporation and they have proposed an enormous amount of money as salary. Therefore, I want to know decision taken against my case? It will help me to take informed decision accordingly.

I hope to hear from you in relation to aforementioned issue ASAP, in case you need any further information, feel free to contact me on my mobile number.

Yours faithfully,
SAIRA

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 343, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
.... Therefore, I gave detailed answers to all of the question with examples to completely sa...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ree to contact me on my mobile number. Yours faithfully, SAIRA
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, consequently, therefore, well, as to, in addition, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29951690821 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20299691632 2.54303337028 126% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642512077295 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.8029711549 44.8134815571 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4166666667 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 4.34317383033 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128733078397 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403382806273 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386950509694 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847420520472 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365406128174 0.0580467560999 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 70.7449484536 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 8.71597938144 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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