In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?
Recently people have tended to go to the chain stores or malls to purchase the goods, which led to the closure of the local markets. In my opinion, although there is an advantage for buyers in such tendency, generally, it is a more negative change.
On the one hand, customers usually get a better deal when buying from shopping malls. As long as large stores can purchase goods in huge quantities they are able to sell them at lower prices. To illustrate this, when malls appeared in my country, people realized the difference in the cost of necessities and preferred buying from malls than from small shops.
On the other hand, the development of large shopping centers causes ineffective economics in the area. The local businesses play a vital role in the creation of employment positions. Thus, if they stop working, a lot of people lose their income. For example, when a small local shop of dairy products near my house closed, the farm, that supplied it, faced with financial problems, because the dairy store was their main sales market. So they were forced to shorten personnel.
Another negative factor in the extension of large stores is that, usually, they provide lower-quality products than the local markets. Obviously, it is much easier to maintain a greater quality of goods or services in small businesses, because owners meet clients in person and check products by themselves. For instance, many local shops issue questionnaires to ask their customers if there is something they would love to change in the service they acquire.
in conclusion, even though, usually, large shopping centers can boast better prices for customers, the benefits of local stores, like high-quality products and more positive influence on the local economics, outweigh the pluses of large stores.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r deal when buying from shopping malls. As long as large stores can purchase goods...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...to change in the service they acquire. in conclusion, even though, usually, large...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0777027027 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63310516059 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5268153092 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.357142857 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325292362734 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933740653697 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682493584374 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161327993993 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404253017702 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.