Although the disappearance of many small shops would bring some disadvantages to the residents nearby, the emergence of big shopping malls reflects a more positive development of the society as my concern.
As a fan of 7/11 convenience store, I contend that the small shops around the community offer the people living there high-quality daily neccessities in time. Maybe just for a band-aid to cure the cut on finger, people would not drive for miles to buy it in Costoco, with their bleeding hands. This unique convenience will never be overlooked since people do not shop at large shopping center every day.
However, big shopping mall is the symbol of metropolitan, a great stride of the city. In China, when we were thinking of the big shopping mall ten years ago, we may name some big places like Los Angeles outlets or Dubai mall. Nowadays, hundreds of outlets with thousands of famous brands appeared in many cities in China, which is the result of civilization and modernization. With so many stores togehter, people would purchase various kinds of things easily.
Furthermore, big shopping center redefined people's daily life style, letting them have more choices to go out for shopping and happiness together, rather than shopping online. Becuase not only the commodities but also superior services are offered in these big shopping centers. Firstly, children can play at the palygrounds inside the big shopping mall. Second, there are also many restaurants for people to enjoy various kinds of cuisines. Moreover, movie theaters, book stores and coffee shops are becoming more and more popular in the shopping center, where are the new socialzing places for people.
In all, even the number of the small shops is declining these years, they will survive since we need them for convenience. As for the big ones, they represent the future and offer us not only with shopping but also more tertiary industry services.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 484, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oreover, movie theaters, book stores and coffee shops are becoming more and more ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09748427673 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63042936737 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591194968553 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8446588923 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.066666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332904531256 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118342904524 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761300125182 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196845087829 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561758622609 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 484, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oreover, movie theaters, book stores and coffee shops are becoming more and more ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09748427673 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63042936737 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591194968553 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8446588923 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.066666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332904531256 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118342904524 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761300125182 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196845087829 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561758622609 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.