Some people prioritze accepting the reality of works over struggling for themselves, whereas other people do not but for it. I would like to try my best to fight for the job and financial predicament rather than withdrawing. I will discuss the two different opinions on the dilemma and address my views as follows.
For one thing, I totally understand the peope who plan to lay flat while they encounter either the unsatisfied jobs or lacking of money. Life is tough, they may not really want to accept this siutation, however, they have to due to other limitations in their lives. Maybe they earn more money with another job, while the uncertainty would be relatively high if they leave the work at present.
For another thing, the reasons of people like me who want to fight back is also evident. As the uncertainty of new working condition exists, the possiblity of improvements is there, too. If we get prepared, the consequence of us could be better. If not successful, we can summerize the experince of our endeavors prepraring for the next time. Seldom people win at first, and the people win at last talk.
With the optimistic attitude to life, I wil try hard to prepare. Once get chance, I will work on my best to improve the unpleasant condition. Moreover, I will not change my situation upon finding it need to be changed since I also have to confront toughness of my own life. Trying hard to make everthing ready, I will wait for the opportunity that could help me out of my situation.
In all, I belive all of us want to change if we have a job we don't like or being lacking of money. Prepare for the future at present, the golden chance will come in the end.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 63, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...f us want to change if we have a job we dont like or being lacking of money. Prepare...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, whereas, while, another thing, for another thing, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57947019868 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60112563476 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579470198675 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7677097522 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.3529411765 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150014630793 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455767865956 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0290268130361 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800058280447 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443451230381 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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