In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping.
Is this a positive or a negative development?
It has been observed that consumers are preferring shopping complexes lately due to which many small domestic businesses have closed. Some people believe that this is a positive development, whereas others hold the opposite perspective. In this essay, I will delve deeper into this topic by discussing both the optimistic and the adverse views, while expressing my support for the latter.
To begin with, a good reason for believing that closure of small shops is a detrimental advancement is because this can increase country’s overall poverty. This implies that the small business owners could strive to earn money and they might be unable to feed themselves and their families; therefore, this would encourage the individuals to do unlawful activities in order to earn their living. Consequently, the crime rate may soar as a huge segment of society can become disengaged.
On the other hand, having the convenience for purchasing is one of the reasons that convenient shops are not preferred by customers. This means that malls could offer a wider range of products and services under one roof so that the public might buy different commodities without going to different shops; as a result, people would buy groceries quickly. Nevertheless, the earnings for small business owners will still be at risk as enormous shopping centres can attract many customers thereby forcing local shops to close.
In conclusion, although people may vary in their opinions, I personally believe that closing retailers influences communities negatively because this can soar nation’s poverty rate, hence, causing different problems in the society. If the general populace do not understand this and continue to shop from malls, then we might see hunger and homelessness availing the country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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It has been observed that consumers are preferring shopping complexes lately due to which ...
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Suggestion:
... and homelessness availing the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, whereas, while, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38078291815 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84105701624 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651245551601 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.6846828798 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.454545455 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4545454545 7.06120827912 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307132486265 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102947280527 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658725977453 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173199769214 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250250042046 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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