In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping
IS it a positive or negative development?
Cetainly, large shopping centres or malls lure customers and as a repurcussion of this notion detrimental effects are seen on existance small local shops which arouses a question about tendancy of this developmemt. In this essay, I shall unfold the multiple reasons stating the merits of this change.
To begin with, large shopping centres provide a plethora of outlets under one roof so that customers can compair the product and choose wisely without any travelling. In addition, air conditioning system , comfortable sitting area and myriad food outlets provide are necessary comfort and relaxation to customers which boosts their satisfaction. To illustrate, survey conducted at 'Viviana mall' has shown that customer satisfaction is highest in malls as they got the chance to browse the items among different brands and choose the best for themselves in terms of quality and price which was not possible while shopping at local markets. Thus, mall culture enhances overall experience of shopping.
Secondly, huge shopping centres opens the ocean of opportunity for local people at different stages of construction and maintainace. It only gives employement to skilled workers as manager of stores or hotels but also offers wedges to menial workers who performs cleaning and other roles in malls. The report of Times shows that, there is a eminent improvement in lifestyle of mediocre people who rely on jobs at malls due to higher remuneration offered to them as compaired to similar jobs which they used to do in local shops. Considering this fact, it can be said that mall culture has improved overall lifestyle of people.
Although large shopping centers promotes foreign brands and junk food as compared to local shops people are wise enough to choose the options which suit for their culture and healths. It is indeed true that, small shops are primary hub for local artist to broadcast their work. However, nowadays some malls have a separate section dedicated to local art and handmade products which gives a great platform to local artist to showcase their work in front of wide audience. In addition, they can sell their product at inflated rates to gain more profit which was not possible earlier in local markets.
In light of above, mall culture has brought significant improvements in lives of local people. It is indebatible that this notion will flourish in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22680412371 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62848410709 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569587628866 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5039368858 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.75 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260971793608 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827971615705 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665484728859 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139224761654 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639977847065 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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