You went on a trip and found that the guide was really helpful. Write a letter to the tour company manager.
In your letter, you should:
describe the tour
tell what you liked about the tour guide
recommend manager ways/methods to appreciate the tour guide
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have recently been to the Penang trip with your travel company and your excellent staff service has made this a wonderful experience. Thus, I am writing this letter to appreciate your incredible service and especially the tour guide Mr. Smith.
It was a 4 days 3 nights trip to Penang starting from 4th December. It was an educational tour, therefore, it was vital to have a knowledgeable guide with us and certainly to provided a qualified staff to suffice the purpose.
Mr. Smith was our tour guide for the entire trip. Right from day 1 he was full of enthusiasm and helped us in every aspect during our journey. We visited various places on this trip, and at each place, Mr. Smith gave a detailed insight into Penang culture and helped us to discover more about the place. Furthermore, he was so fluent in speaking local languages which greatly helped us to explore flora and fauna of Penang.
I must say he is a valuable asset to your organization and deserves the recognition of his good work. Therefore, I would like to suggest that you ought to give him either promote him to a higher position along with an incremental remuneration or a performance bonus for his commendable work. This will only appreciate his work but also motivate others to follow his footsteps.
Once again thank you for awesome service and I hope you will consider my suggestions towards your staff seriously.
Yours Faithfully,
Pallavi Chaudhari
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 937.175257732 132% => OK
No of words: 251.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91633466135 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7186732549 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633466135458 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2242804605 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9230769231 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232898151284 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809773709896 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735713345842 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12453439076 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484810255709 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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