You went on a trip and found that the guide was really helpful Write a letter to the tour company manager In your letter you should describe the tour tell what you liked about the tour guide recommend manager ways methods to appreciate the tour guide

Essay topics:

You went on a trip and found that the guide was really helpful. Write a letter to the tour company manager.

In your letter, you should:

• describe the tour

• tell what you liked about the tour guide

• recommend manager ways/methods to appreciate the tour guide

Dear Manager

I am writing this letter appreciate my tour guide, who guided me during my business trip. Company chose me for Delhi trip to deal with some prime customers. I Visited there on The 27th of November. Unfortunately, I am not much familiar with that city, so, it seems difficult for me to wander there because of an unknown place.

Then I called a tour guide who is contact given to me by the company, he reached me within 15 minutes of my call and greet me very well and he kinda very generous person. He's very well-known to all the places so he aided me graciously to find my destinations. Interestingly, due to his bilingual capabilities, he communicated easily with people of other states. His worthwhile assistance make my trip memorable.

Because of his valuable guidance, I want our company should give him some rewards as well as an increment. Also, he is well suitable employee to join higher rank. So it will be more helpful for him to polish his skills more efficiently.

I hope you will reply to me soon

Yours faithfully

Jot

Votes
Average: 9.4 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 172, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: He's
...well and he kinda very generous person. Hes very well-known to all the places so he...
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Line 21, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l reply to me soon Yours faithfully Jot
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, well, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75401069519 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78999901141 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668449197861 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9606266167 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0833333333 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5833333333 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130300658315 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435654707522 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674578668095 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0756078443829 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431904454966 0.0580467560999 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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